Another story for Lewis Carroll's rabbit hole day

[renniek.livejournal.com]

Hi. I haven't posted on this group before because I don't normally do creative writing (although I've occasionally browsed, because I do read a lot).
I wrote a story for the Lewis Carroll rabbit hole day, and really enjoyed it. I've seen suggestions that these could be archived in this group, so thought I'd add it in, and hopefully get some feedback from you lovely writing people.

( About the story )

( Part one, posted 9:23am )

( Part two, posted 11:51am )

( Part three, posted 2:20pm )

( Part four, posted 5:45pm )

( Part five, posted 11:59pm )

First post in aaaages...

[ephraim.livejournal.com]

Cross posted after yesterday's Rabbit hole exercises. Comments/insults and praise welcomed.

( Crisis in Wonderland )