Bad Fanfic

[kingandy]

Okay, this may not mean much to many people - it's fanfiction for a relatively obscure TV series.  I post it here partially to see if it's accessible to people outside the fandom; I suspect not at all, since fanfic, by its nature, is aimed at people who already know the setup.  Witness the entirely skipped exposition scene.  (I was thinking about including a brief overview of the show and its mechanics up here, but I've decided to field questions by way of comments instead.  Think of it as an intellectual exercise.)  Mostly, however, I'm positing it for general storytelling critiques.

It's largely an exercise in introducing a new character to an established mythos, but also an excuse to see whether I could write existing characters faithfully.  Just so you know - I don't make a habit of this, it's my first fanfic.

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