[identity profile] mskitsune.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] just_writing
hi! i made a poem and...[shrugs] just thought you might want to comment. :) actually, i don't really know how to make poems ^_^ i just write what comes into mind... ^_^



I hate you.

You make me fall for you

Every moment

Every action

Every word

I fall further for you.



I hate you.

You comfort me

You make me laugh

You make me..smile.

I fall. Fall in love with you even more.



I hate you.

You console

You alleviate the pain

You make me forget

You make me fall.



I hate you for it;

I hate the way you made me

Love you



You make me fall

Everyday

Everytime I think of you

Everysecond

I hate you

Because you made me fall



You keep making me fall.



--mskitsune--

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July 10, 2003

9:42 pm
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