Oct. 5th, 2004

[identity profile] wulfboy.livejournal.com
Hallo. You may have seen this before. I don't usually return to stuff I've written before, but in this case I'm making an exception. Following advice, I've tightened it up a little, I think. There are two (possibly three) more short installments, one of which is already written. I first posted it (and the sequel) in my journal proper. Second piece probably to follow fast.

Ein )
[identity profile] wulfboy.livejournal.com
The second part; there is at least one more part to come, and if I'm lucky I'll finish it there. My inability to know when to stop is hardly a secret. Again, first posted in main journal, now edited a reasonable amount, especially in the third bit and to try and make the second bit easier to read. I wonder if it might be best to write the second section in the form of a script - dialogue is an area where my grasp of punctuation runs off and joins the Foreign Legion.

Zwei )
[identity profile] wulfboy.livejournal.com
Right. Third piece. This one is unpolished indeed. I'm not sure whether it works, now I read all three pieces together. I might re-write the first section in the present tense.

Drei )

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